Don't you all have the problem of returning home after school feeling tired, emotionless and exhausted? You don't have any energy left to do your homework, hang around with friends or sport. You always seem to end up lying on the couch eating crips or choclate and watching something like Oprah Winfrey.
HERE IS THE SOLUTION!
A drink that gives you the energy you just need. Its packed with vitamines, minerals and fibre. It stimulates your brain to finish of your homework, sport - or do whatever you like.
Buy it now and experience it yourself.
Language use
Rule of three - I used the rule of 3 two times.
-'Feeling tired, exhausted & emotionless'
-'Do homework, sport, chill with friends'
Use of the imperative
-'Buy it now and experience it yourself'
Talking positively about the future
-'But here is the solution'
Exaggeration
-'You ALWAYS end up lying on the couch...'
Talking about the everyday
-'Returning home after school (...) ''
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